They say sharks can smell blood in the water from miles away. I think the same can be said of men when it comes to the end of a relationship that involves the girl they wanted but never thought they would get the chance to have. They suddenly find the courage to come in closer, circling, waiting to move in for the kill.

I wonder if they smell the blood

In the water I’ve been drowning in

Circling, knowing my life is nearly over

With you – how long have they waited

Now emboldened daring to approach

To sneak a glimpse, catch the scent

Of a woman scorned

Once entrapped in your net of lies

Having clawed her way free

Swimming closer, dazzled by the shimmering scales

Covering the mermaid’s delicate flesh

Now scarred from years of struggle

Inside the seine of a loveless covenant

Yearning to touch, to nibble

That which you found so distasteful

Only fit to ensnare and flaunt before them

How long now ’til they devour me?

 

 

©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 9, 2011

    Pretty grim, but clever writing.

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 9, 2011

    Wow! I really love this one. good imagery.

  • neopisiva on Aug 9, 2011

    Awesome, a poem inspired by shark attack!

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 9, 2011

    excellent!

  • olea33 on Aug 9, 2011

    Good one

  • CA Johnson on Aug 9, 2011

    I really like this poem. One of my old boyfriends was like the shark you described. I did feel free once I left him. Thanks for sharing.

  • Joe Ram on Aug 9, 2011

    nice one.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 10, 2011

    Very passionate and so well written. You really express yourself well.

  • AdamMcAuley on Aug 31, 2011

    You bring out the terror involved in a shark attack very well.

  • jaidadiz on Sep 16, 2011

    Another great one…

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