She had the look that could pierce into your soul. A poem about silently communicating.

She could see me

She could tell

She held the spell

She had done well

She held my heart

She had it from the start

She was an angel with dark eyes

She was too kind to hide any disguise

She was demure

She was an allure

She could see me there

She would stare

She could not look away

She stood still with dismay

She could………..

She would……….

She made everything good

She gleamed so pure

She knew me before

She delightfully laughed

She was happy at last

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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Comments (8)
  • William J Felchner on Dec 14, 2009

    Yes, she apparently knew. Excellent.

  • drelayaraja on Dec 14, 2009

    She is nice :-)

  • AlmaG on Dec 14, 2009

    Fantastic poem :)

  • mkd1788 on Dec 15, 2009

    fantastic post…greatly expressed

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 15, 2009

    wonderful poem.

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 16, 2009

    Very nice piece.

  • jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009

    nice piece..

  • Dame Barbara on Jan 1, 2010

    Beautiful. I like your writing very well. Such a romantic. Are you for real?!!

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