Who is She?

She’s a beauty
Beauty I can’t resist
Beauty they envy
She’s got a sexy body
Body I can’t miss
Body they dream
She’s alluring
She’s captivating
She’s everything
She’s glamorous
She’s humorous
She’s wondrous
She’s got the look
Everybody wants to see
Every lady wants to be
She’s irresistible
And she’s hot
She’s seductive
She’s a fighter
She never surrenders
She’s do or die
For her love
And she…
Turn my world
Upside down

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  • tracy sardelli on Apr 26, 2008

    Beautifuly written, Nobert.

  • salvatore on Apr 26, 2008

    beautiful words, well written, sounds like an awesome lady, well done buddy, keep on writing.

  • Judy Sheldon on Apr 26, 2008

    Remarkable lady, beautiful poem

  • Gwen Cuizon on Apr 26, 2008

    my! you must be so in love. she seems so perfect in your eyes.

  • Divakar Narayan on Apr 26, 2008

    Nice One..
    Hey man you are in love!!:)

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 26, 2008

    Wow!!!!

  • Francie on Apr 26, 2008

    Hard to beat All That! =))

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 26, 2008

    Impressive, I like your poem.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 26, 2008

    Tracy,Judy, Gwen,Lucy,Francie,Ruby,Salvatore and Divakar,
    thanks to all of you guys,

  • mitch on Apr 27, 2008

    are u inlove?hope she’s the right girl.you deserve 2 be happy

  • Patz on Apr 30, 2008

    That’s intriguing. She must be somebody very special to you.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Apr 30, 2008

    Sounds like this is a very special lady. You are lucky to have someone you love so much.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 30, 2008

    Hi Mitch,Darlene and Patz,
    thanks a lot to you guys

  • Rana Sinha on May 13, 2008

    Lovely!

    Just hope that “She” is not someone other than your wife or gf.

    So, you are in love! All the best!

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