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She Did a Pledge

drelayaraja on Dec 14, 2009
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About my love.

She Did a Pledge

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

In my heart

She signed in a pact, 

And in my thoughts

She made an impact,

… … … …

With her smiles

She did a pledge, 

Her friends were many

And I had an edge…..

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • LovelyWolf on Dec 14, 2009

    Love the metephore usage here, great read!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 14, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful.

  • nithyllsmom on Dec 14, 2009

    This is amazing :-)

  • lovenluck on Dec 14, 2009

    Nice one plain, simple and beautiful lines

  • Citra Florenca on Dec 14, 2009

    Beautifully written. You’re so talented!

  • johnnydod on Dec 14, 2009

    so so good

  • deep blue on Dec 14, 2009

    Truly catching. Well done.

  • leylucs on Dec 14, 2009

    wow nice!

  • Jenny Heart on Dec 14, 2009

    Well done!

  • ashan1614 on Dec 14, 2009

    Hopefully she will keep her pledge. Good write!

  • Sunitha Stalin on Dec 14, 2009

    Good one

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 14, 2009

    Simple, yet beautiful.

  • Starpisces on Dec 14, 2009

    I like anything that is simple and sweet… and this is one of them..thanks.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 14, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • The Last Ogre on Dec 14, 2009

    Very nice. Sweet and simple. Great!

  • Judi Eddy on Dec 14, 2009

    Lovely, simple and to the point. Judi x

  • xoxo on Dec 14, 2009

    Beautiful piece. Thanks.

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 14, 2009

    Nice poem..

  • diamondpoet on Dec 14, 2009

    That was lovely as always.

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 14, 2009

    A simple and gently confident poem.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 14, 2009

    Romantic and beautiful

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 14, 2009

    very sweet

  • richardpeeej on Dec 14, 2009

    nice words

  • AlmaG on Dec 14, 2009

    Lovely words and loved the title :)

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 14, 2009

    Good choices of words

  • milspouse05 on Dec 15, 2009

    Simple and sweet. nice.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 15, 2009

    xtremely beautiful

  • jaysonv on Dec 15, 2009

    lovely poem.. very nice.

  • Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Dec 15, 2009

    Simplicity is beauty…..

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009

    The title grabbed my attention and the poem was so worth it. God bless.

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