A backstabbing woman is the last person you want to mess with…

she did it…
the slight hint of pain
then the pleasure of blood
sliding, down the curves of his back
he feels the knife
it is deep inside him
he is scared to turn around
scared to find,
the one person he fears,
but instead what he finds…
is the love of his life
had once held the knife…
he tries to take a breath
but nothing comes in
but all that comes out,
is “she did it again”
he falls to his knees
in a puddle of blood…
her eyes filled with tears
knowing what she has done
but slowly he rises
and his strength comes back,
he stands before her
and pulls the knife from his back
he finds the strength inside him
to say a few last words
and all he could say is i love you
that just made it worse
his eyes fill with tears,
not from the pain of the knife
but knowing his true love,
is who took his life…

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  • Judy Sheldon-Walker (Sheldon) on Aug 19, 2007

    You have a way with words. Hopefully you find a way with her. LOL

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