She is My Nourishment

TroostAvenue on Nov 10, 2009

Tags: wine

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She nourishes my soul.

She is the finest wine I might taste
The best flavor on my lips
That which satisfies the best
My need for sustenance

She nourishes too my soul
Brings deep founded happiness
I simply could not live without her
She sustains me in my life

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Phantom Beauty on Nov 10, 2009
She is the finest wine on my lips is overused…like her kisses or whatever. But I guess youre saying her whole self is like wine? I still think you should come up with something more original. And I dont like wine, hahaha.
Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009
Lovely and passionate poem!
Snooky on Nov 11, 2009
Wow man thats a blast
did’nt think u had it in you

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