She Makes Me Wonder

drelayaraja on Mar 26, 2010

Tags: drelayaraja, elayaraja, Eyes, language, love, mind, ponder, she, silence, sweetheart, Thoughts, wonder

My poem on my wife.

She Makes Me Wonder

With her silence she speaks

The language of love,

She makes me wonder

It all happens how?

For the sake of love

Her thoughts revolved me around,

I searched her everywhere

But, no where she was found.

Not right not left

Neither in front nor back,

No surprise, I found

My sweetheart in my mind.

I ponder how?

The sleep left my eyes,

Is her thoughts

That much nice!

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wonder on Mar 26, 2010
A great depth lies in the poem, well expressed.
johnnydod on Mar 26, 2010
you old softy you
Judi Eddy on Mar 26, 2010
Yourr wife must be very proud of you. liked it. judi
aimsteel on Mar 26, 2010
A very lovely poem.
Brenda Nelson on Mar 26, 2010
Nice tribute to your wife.
Lord Banks on Mar 26, 2010
Nice one, silence normally means your wife is ….fed up with you or something you have done, but great poem. LB
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 26, 2010
Just lovely.
Atanacio on Mar 26, 2010
One word Perfect!
darren15my on Mar 26, 2010
Nice….. What a lovely poem.. I’m learning from you yea.. wait for my poem..

Cheers.
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Mar 26, 2010
A very beautiful tribute for your wife.
pattiann on Mar 26, 2010
Nice poem and great graphics.
Sharif Ishnin on Mar 26, 2010
Beautifully penned my dear doctor.
Yalonda on Mar 26, 2010
Nice!
yes me on Mar 26, 2010
Well put Doc, you paint a very nice picture. cheers
bailieman on Mar 26, 2010
A nice tribute to your wife.
giftarist on Mar 26, 2010
Well expressed doc.
aleah on Mar 27, 2010
wow, a lovely tribute!
diamondpoet on Mar 27, 2010
You already know that you are a creative genius so what more can I say, good job.
Precious Illusions on Mar 27, 2010
beautiful words..
cobaltinee on Mar 27, 2010
She must be wonder. Good work.
CHAN LEE PENG on Mar 27, 2010
Touching, and a great tribute to your wife. Clicked you “liked it”
Moses Ingram on Mar 27, 2010
A wonderful tribute to your wife.
Cebah on Mar 27, 2010
Sweet poem.
clickmarbin on Mar 27, 2010
very romantic…keep writing
Goodselfme on Mar 28, 2010
How beautifully you express your inner deep thoughts. This is so meaningful in many aspects. Most would take silence as a relief. You gave it a wonderful twist.
Jamie Myles on Apr 1, 2010
A lovely tribute to your wife.
Johanny Lisbeth on Apr 4, 2010
How beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
novelist on Apr 6, 2010
Significant and thought-provoking!
Grace Kathryn on Apr 6, 2010
Mysterious. Could it be that someone’s thoughts of you are so strong, they wake you from your sleep?
deep blue on Apr 7, 2010
A lovely tribute to your wife,Doc.
The Last Ogre on Apr 9, 2010
She definitely loved this one. So romantic write!
xoxo on Apr 10, 2010
So romantic indeed! Lucky wife of yours!
galindo on Apr 11, 2010
very romantic and sweet, good job!
T. S. Lewis on Apr 11, 2010
A lovely tribute
ShadowPsychos on Apr 28, 2010
lovely poem

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