My girl knows me better than I do.

When I’m feeling down,

She reads my thoughts.

She knows my grumpy frown,

Reminds me trials aren’t for naught.

 

Everyday when I come home,

She is there with a kiss.

Not one that would go and roam,

She reads me and knows how I’d miss.

 

While I drive her here and there,

She reads my mood with gentle charm.

Should I give out a fierce glare,

I feel her softly touch my arm.

 

A trying day I must ascend,

Yet I know her love is not on loan.

As she is my furry friend,

She reads me like a Milk Bone.

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  • abhishek40914 on Nov 16, 2009

    beautiful

  • PR Mace on Nov 16, 2009

    Nicely done.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009

    Your puppy should have her picture up on this post, you know!

  • giftarist on Nov 17, 2009

    simply beautiful!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    You are so lucky. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Francois Hagnere on Nov 17, 2009

    Bonjour Clay! What a lovely poem…

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 17, 2009

    Awww what a sweet write about your girl! I think you should have added her picture with this Clay! Give her a milkbone or two for the wonderful little poem you were just able to write for her!

  • AlmaG on Nov 17, 2009

    Lovely poem :)
    I guess that’s our super power… to read minds and moods of the most important person in our life. :)

  • Jane Jane on Nov 22, 2009

    lovely dog.

  • deep blue on Nov 22, 2009

    Well written with hilarious twist. Amazing that if she looks at you like a milkbone she could hold her bite for a lick.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 22, 2009

    pets are definitely more friendly than man/woman is rather a human being
    gr8
    lh

  • Enlightenedpsych2 on Nov 22, 2009

    so she wants to just gobble you up then, huh ? Cute poem in honor of your adorible uhhhm, girl buddy ?

  • CA Johnson on Nov 23, 2009

    This is a great poem about your girl. I thought it was really cute.

  • rutherfranc on Nov 24, 2009

    :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 24, 2009

    any one would even i do after seeing my name back on ur list

    An Apology friends

  • Kate Smedley on Nov 26, 2009

    That’s so sweet!! Gorgeous picture (and you of course!) and great poem, I’m jealous!

  • fragile18 on Dec 6, 2009

    cute puppy!

  • Linda Lori on Dec 7, 2009

    Nice poem about a best friend! =)

  • S A JOHNSON on Dec 11, 2009

    So Sweet!!

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 21, 2009

    A sweet poem to your girl. She’s cute!

  • Poetic Enigma on Dec 22, 2009

    This is a lovely poem, so cute…and a nice tribute to your girl!
    Thanks for sharing (:

  • fashion girl on Jan 7, 2010

    such a cute dog :)

  • FOREVER POETRY on Jan 7, 2010

    its uncanny how animals always seem to know. if only humans were so perceptive

  • amilia snow on Jan 11, 2010

    sweet & the ending’s funny XD

  • ML Sheldon on Jan 27, 2010

    That was very cute.

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