When family member fuss and fight, the in-laws should just stay out of it.

You are having your tribulation;

That other sort of trial.

As you sit in isolation,

And man, its hard to smile.

You know, God is waiting;

To get you out of this.

But still, you are hating;

You don’t have a wish.

You tried to be strong.

But, she talked about your mother.

And hitting her was wrong,

Cause, she’s married to your brother.

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Comments (5)
  • sandie on Oct 30, 2009

    nice written poem.

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 31, 2009

    Great one to read

  • serowa on Oct 31, 2009

    You didn’t hit her, I hope? Nice poem, left me nervous!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009

    creative piece.

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 17, 2009

    Good write. I feel the tension here.

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