She Will Forever be Tormented by Her Innocence

Maxthevir on Nov 6, 2009

Tags: character, innocence, torment

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A poem about one of my characters.

She doesn’t know of evil.

But evil always follows her.

Her heart will always be broken.

Not even I, her creator, can rewrite what is already written.

She will always be hurting.

Always haunted.

No amount of love, laughter can make her smile.

But she will be loved by many.

Once you cross her path,

You’ll never forget her.

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Comments (6)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 6, 2009
innocence is what attracts ppl..but never forgiven by fate..
i loved dis piece.. well scripted.
Themax on Nov 6, 2009
so true and nice ,Thank you
cardy on Nov 6, 2009
Very nice work enjoyed the read
Hansika on Nov 6, 2009
marvelous
lillyrose on Nov 6, 2009
really moving piece and very well presented!
diamondpoet on Nov 6, 2009
That was very interesting.

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