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SHE WORE A RED WEDDDING DRESS

She wore a red , long wedding dress

and boy did she look a hot mess

She looked like a juicy, shiny

candied apple

or a punch colored bottle of snapple

She even wore red flaming lip stick

She walked down the aisle

really quick

She wore a red wedding dress

No one was that impressed

If she was trying to be different

she hit the mark

Wearing the red dress

wasn’t really smart

her groom

was so embarrassed

he turned blue

He was just ready to say

“I do”

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  • Judy T Lloyd on Apr 30, 2009

    Sorta like Lucy on General Hospital\’s wedding.

  • Sabriena Williams- Author of this Poem on May 3, 2009

    I just wanted to add humor about the whole decision process of chosing a dress. Everyone think that a bride must wear a white wedding dress. A bride can wear any color she desire. I was just drawing humor to the matter. The nex time I get married, I might wear a neon green dress – LOL

  • Reilley on Jun 4, 2009

    In China, the color of purity is bright red, like your candy apple, so that is what brides wear.

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