A little country song I wrote.

She cries in the corner while the other kids play

this kills her every second every minute of everyday.

She says “why can’t they just like me I don’t understand.”

What she can’t see is that

she’s beutiful sh’s wonderful I wish that she’d see that now

she’s an angel she’s a miracle of that I had no doubt.

I wish that they could see that she’s just a little girl right now but  one day she will be the strongest woman that you’ll ever meet.

They call her names and bring her down she puts her face to the ground.

They hurt her so bad it makes her so sad and all she does is cry.

all she wants to do is hide.

she’s tired of being put down being walked all over. Maybe one day they’ll be sorry for everytime they broke her down. One day they’ll wake up and see that she’s stronger than they’ll ever be.

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  • rajaryanme on Jul 27, 2010

    Fantastic lines very touching.

  • Raj the Tora on Jul 27, 2010

    Very well written. Will remind everyone of their mother – the strongest women in each person’s lives

  • Vivek Ratan on Jul 27, 2010

    What a nice poem,wonderfully said and depicted.

  • pattiann on Aug 2, 2010

    Bravo. You said it was a country song. You should send it to a country singer. Who knows? You might make big money as a songwriter. It’s obvious you have talent.

  • Jessica on Aug 19, 2010

    The lyrics are amazing. I know for a fact that any country hot- shot would pay huge amounts of money for this song because it is real. Also, it will help everyone connect with personal memories and remember who they know that is like this girl.

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