Shimmer

Lady Sunshine on Apr 16, 2010

Tags: blue, daylight, Moon, Peekaboo, shimmer, white

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The moon in daylight. A "haiku".

A pale shimmer
A patch of white in clear blue
Playing peekaboo

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Comments (18)

Guy Hogan on Apr 16, 2010
Your haikus are so elemental. I wish I could make my flash fiction this elemental.
ken bultman on Apr 16, 2010
A daylight moon solidifies with friendship the romance stimulated by the moon at night.
willie wondka on Apr 16, 2010
like this. xx
Christine Ramsay on Apr 16, 2010
Such a beautiful and playful description. I love this.

Christine
ShadowPsychos on Apr 16, 2010
lovely
Atanacio on Apr 16, 2010
very nice sweet
LoveDoctor on Apr 16, 2010
This is beautiful and so is the image.
giftarist on Apr 16, 2010
Imagery was perfect, milady.
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 16, 2010
u said hopeful in ur profile

i was HOPEFUL U WOULD
some day read me

lovely haikuuuuuuuuuuu
Marie Antoinette on Apr 16, 2010
Oh, I love this one so much! I love the moon so I always find it a special treat when we can get a glimpse of it during daytime.
VTech on Apr 16, 2010
nice , thanks for sharing.
Shirley Shuler on Apr 16, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, what a lovely haiku, just perfect!
8Shei8 on Apr 17, 2010
A delightful haiku
Sharif Ishnin on Apr 17, 2010
Wonderfully written.
Melody SJAL on Apr 17, 2010
Wow, so simple yet so brilliant.
drelayaraja on Apr 18, 2010
Nicely penned.
deep blue on Apr 18, 2010
Very well put. The moon is very tranquil and I could almost see the sea of tranquility,lol.
wonder on Apr 21, 2010
Very cleverly composed.

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