Shining Star

Joseph Scott on Aug 31, 2010

Tags: grace, open arms, shining star, sincerity

My shining star.

My shining star

How beautiful you are.

Your smile leaves me breathless.

And standing among the faithless

I feel your embrace.

Surely your words were not a lie,

But my mind still tries to deny

Your grace.

Your face

Is always on my mind.

In my heart you will find

Sincerity.

I ask for your will to lead me straight,

To your open arms I won’t be late.

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PSingh1990 on Aug 31, 2010
Great poem…..

it’s a shining poem…………

thanks for lovely share.
mysocalledlife on Aug 31, 2010
aw, what a lovely poem! keep it coming…
Likha on Aug 31, 2010
So much sincerity here Joe. Is this a spiritual poem? Can also pass for a love poem. You have it. Keep going my friend.
Kaye TM on Aug 31, 2010
cute! so sweet!!
Michal Dorcak on Aug 31, 2010
Very touching (hope I wrote it right).
Michal Dorcak on Aug 31, 2010
Very touching/cute (hope I wrote it right).
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 31, 2010
Nice… nice… so romantic. Good one friend.
LoveDoctor on Aug 31, 2010
well, thank you my friend. lol.

Nice and lovely poem
Abhipray Sahoo on Aug 31, 2010
Nice poem!
blknight45 on Aug 31, 2010
Nice…
Joseph Scott on Sep 1, 2010
Wow, thank you everyone!!
LOL Doc.. you’re welcome! ha
@ Likha: I kind of meant it to be both. lol. The love for us is unimaginable.. I was expressing the love back!
Fassy on Sep 1, 2010
so sweet
yes me on Sep 1, 2010
Nice write here cheers
Joseph Scott on Sep 1, 2010
Thank you Fassy and yes me!
sandcastle on Sep 2, 2010
fascinating poem.
Joseph Scott on Sep 2, 2010
Thank you Sandcastle
obikelvin on Sep 2, 2010
sweet share!
Starpisces on Sep 2, 2010
Here comes another shining star… that’s me, haha….just kidding…
wonderful poem….liked it.
livemike on Sep 2, 2010
Great poetry!!
Atanacio on Sep 4, 2010
you have a different style of writing again thumbs up
Joseph Scott on Sep 4, 2010
Thank you all sooo much
Goodselfme on Sep 5, 2010
Masterfully accomplished piece with great imagery and a brisk flow relaying all that is needed.

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