This is a brief discussion of how my life has small portions of complete and utter chaos.

“This boat is obviously sinking!”,
shouted my idol into empty ears!
The sound braces my soul for tandem…
My heart falls into the hands of unknown sources!
“Aghh… Aghh… Aghh!!!”
“This building is totally burning down!”
The cataclysm of explosion rips through,
my tattered conscience, creating a soft oblivion.
Deeper I fall as forgetfulness overcomes.
Will I maintain a lonely walk,
shrouded by confusion on my worldly tread meal?
Down… Down… Even still, further down.
Will I allow myself to succumb?
“My heart is slowly drying up!”

(The quotations are from a song by Modest Mouse called “Shit Luck”)

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  • wolffe on Sep 2, 2009

    Sounds a bit chaotic at times. I hope the other times are peaceful.

  • thestickman on Sep 2, 2009

    punk-rock? never heard of the performer/band…

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