A shootout…

A prolonged gun battle,

everything would rattle,

on-lookers herded out the way like cattle,

two policemen were killed,

and five others wounded,

as the pain remained,

later pathologists discovered

that one of the gunmen sustained

a lethal heart wound,

death was coming soon,

yet he managed to remain ambulatory

for close to an hour,

terror reigned, in a mist of a shower,

firing at police as on-lookers cower,

the shooter attempted to escape,

the bullet in his heart continued to scrape,

then finally collapsing to the ground,

the police gathered around,

quietly they watched,

death came, and no one made a sound.

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  • Guy Hogan on Jan 9, 2011

    You have captured in a few words the truth of the modern world that we live in. It is a situation straight out of the newspapers.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 10, 2011

    You have depicted the scene very well. It’s a shame that the shooter attempted to escape. Good imagery of terror in the mist of a shower.

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 10, 2011

    Good piece!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • albert1jemi on Jan 10, 2011

    thanks for sharing

  • yes me on Jan 12, 2011

    Nice one here Frank cheers

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