A little poem to my ex…

Hear it well,

Hear it now,

Your dead to me, you fucking cow!

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  • jupiter2010 on Jun 17, 2010

    Short and sweet throughout most of our lives, we re told that when it comes to writing, longer is better from our first scrawled book reports to the college admission essays that we lovingly

  • Silent Wasp on Jun 17, 2010

    Have i got my message across? Does it confuse anybody? No! Then the piece has done its job! Thank you…

  • Tina Cassello on Jun 24, 2010

    While I do not approve of such language you did convey your message short and pointedly, I would not call it “sweet” however, but I know you mean that sarcastically.

  • Silent Wasp on Jun 24, 2010

    Thanks for reading fantasia fairy, its much appreciated! Yes it is funny in an angry sort of way! lol

  • Silent Wasp on Jun 24, 2010

    Thanks for reading Tina Cassello. I apologize if you found the language too crude, i believe that otherwise the short poem wouldn’t have achieved the effect it did! Yes the title is meant in sarcasm lol

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