Written from the depths of insomnia

It’s dark now and I’m in bed because I’m supposed to go to sleep
The rain is beating on the roof over me
Lightning provides total flashes every now and then
The sound of thunder rocks my shelter with its rumbling roar
This is a lonely scarey setting
It just has to result in murder
Yes, myself
Here comes the maniac now with a knife
Stand over me for a while and wait
Until I lay on my back
Now see my heart
Aim well, now go
Do it again
Turn the knife a little
Rip the chest open
Good work maniac
Go back where you came from
Now that he’s gone I can get some sleep.

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  • siane on Dec 9, 2007

    hi joe, I agree

    …. wanna meet for drinks to discuss it further?

  • joe on Dec 12, 2007

    you are mean mk who eva you are,

    siane , i would love to hook up for drinks when and where

  • kato on Mar 31, 2008

    i’m waiting at the bar with a mai tie and a machete

  • banga on Aug 12, 2008

    i will join you
    sounds good

  • UNKNOWN on Oct 23, 2008

    shameful if you think that is worth something

  • 187 on Apr 2, 2009

    Yes i agree,
    Just sometimes life will end like that
    and you will get makeup done
    and that\\\’s all she ever wanted OK
    so don\\\’t say that anymore
    its very weird you act like that
    Its upsetting
    i wouldn\\\’t mind going there but
    it would be quite fun OK .. maybe catch up but in the meantime im going to go to brazil

  • weired on Feb 5, 2010

    very nice, this guy is maniac

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