Shot on the street…

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The bullet entered his neck,

doubled over in pain,

then the rain

came,

slowly,

then fast,

what went before him

was his past,

he collapsed, shuddered once,

ground damped,

mind cramped,

and he didn’t move.

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  • Sammy2000 on May 26, 2009

    this one really got to me

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