Shuddering in Ecstasy

Darla Cooke on May 7, 2009

The most satisfying thrill.

You come to me while I’m sleeping,

sneaking into my darkened room.

I never hear the sound of your footsteps,

silence fills the quiet peaceful night.

I submit to your delicates stokes,

as you seduce me in the darkness.

I experience the most satisfying thrill,

while caught within your hypnotic spell.

You leave me shuddering in ecstasy.

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Comments (10)

Westbrook on May 7, 2009
I am wondering if some of you women on Triond are competing to see who can write the most errotic poem… lol Wow!
Mickey Pig Knuckles on May 7, 2009
Wow Darla, the thrill of the unknown can be so exciting. Yet another wonderful poem by you. Excellent Job Dear Girl…

MPK
Daghost413860 on May 7, 2009
Delicious! the unknown is always exciting!
STEVE666 on May 7, 2009
At the risk of sounding like a dirty old man, I like your erotic stuff, Darla.
rajeev bhargava on May 7, 2009
another very natural and beautiful poem full of originality. i really enjoyed reading it.
lh on May 7, 2009
just positively lovely good ecstacy wow
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 7, 2009
My wife, when I was married enjoyed that too. One of the things I miss about marriage. She would say, if you have to awakened, this is the best way….

Great piece of erotica.
HatedNation on May 7, 2009
Wow..thought provoking..
kate smedley on May 8, 2009
Erotic poem, nicely written!
Yovita Siswati on May 8, 2009
very passionate!

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