Demure little bloom.

Soft, delicate bloom
Coy in its fragile beauty
Waiting to unfurl

Photo by Lostash

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  • giftarist on Sep 18, 2009

    Nice piece and nice pic!

  • Jenny Heart on Sep 18, 2009

    Like it a lot!

  • ken bultman on Sep 18, 2009

    I dated her. Wonderful girl. Great photo model for a great photoghapher. She wasn’t as shy as you may have thought.

  • Sourav on Sep 18, 2009

    Very nice!

  • hannemarie on Sep 18, 2009

    lovely words, thank you

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 18, 2009

    A beautiful haiku and a beautiful picture.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 18, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, very beautiful, love the picture of the Shy Rose!!

  • papaleng on Sep 19, 2009

    lovely one with nice picture.

  • Lostash on Sep 19, 2009

    Very pretty….works well with my pic!

  • Jane Jane on Sep 19, 2009

    nice. great it’s not awaiting in vain.really demure.

  • Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 20, 2009

    very nice rose bud!

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