Last week, half of kindergarten was absent on Friday. Middle-school hall sounded like the chorus of "Who turned the dogs loose" with all the barking coughs. I see them all–no wonder I’ve needed a day off.

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Sick days are like a hole in reality
When our body is not our own–
When fever lends shade of the surreal
To the most mundane tasks.

Free by clogged sinuses
Hacking cough, swollen glands
From the ordinary round
Of a normal working day.

At home, in the silences
of a residential
 bedroom community
All gone to work.

At home, surrounded with the undone tasks
Usually ignored by going to work
Earning the cash needed
To house their essential undoneness.

Yet, too clogged to lie down and sleep
Sitting up is painful.
Motion is accompanied by dizziness
Rest is disdainful.

Yet, a cup of tea
so warm and good
To clear the throat
and ease the pain.

An analgesic for the fever
A quiet moment with a book
A movie at which I’ve not had time to look
Sitting still, just doing nothing.

Time for the body to rest and mend
A cease-fire for the work that does not end.

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  • Ramalingam on Oct 7, 2009

    It seems that rest is the need of the hour.

  • Lee Ness on Oct 7, 2009

    I like this poem. Very good.
    Sounds like my children when they are sick
    Lee Ness

  • PR Mace on Oct 7, 2009

    I hate sick days. I feel like I lose a part of my life I will never get back. Well written with good flow.

  • Karen Gross on Oct 7, 2009

    I love the stanza:
    At home, surrounded with the undone tasks
    Usually ignored by going to work
    Earning the cash needed
    To house their essential undoneness.

    This is how I have been feeling for the last 10 years. I am at home, living in a house with much lower standards of cleanliness than I would like – but cannot do much about. Husband says: Just get the kids to do it. They are getting better, but the emotional strain of trying to get them to do anything is so much more intense than the physical pain of doing it myself. Sorry to invite myself to the pity party – I do understand the stress of being a teacher and having to leave lesson plans for a sub and then straighten out the mess when you get back.

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 7, 2009

    some people are lucky, their jobs pay them for sick days, other people are not so lucky if they want to get paid they have to show up for work… this forces many people in low paying jobs to work when sick – think of all the sick people in the food industry. Now, you might say their employers should send them home – but often if a person shows up for work and is sent home – the employer still has to pay them, plus pay a replacement to work for them so this seldom happens.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 7, 2009

    How I remember those days when coughs ran rampant around school, and inevitably teacher ended up coughing too. Mind you I used to so love a day in bed, knowing you didn’t have to do anything because you were sick. A great piece.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Oct 7, 2009

    a good entry as always

  • ken bultman on Oct 7, 2009

    Hope you’re better. Nothing worse than a fever.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 7, 2009

    You are sick, girl. Better go to bed. My grandaughter has pneumonia. She didn\’t want to stay out of school. they have been working so hard in chorus and she had to miss the concert.

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 7, 2009

    Gather your strenght. You know you’re going to need it.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 7, 2009

    Great poem. Everybody need to regain strength

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 23, 2009

    Nicely done. Particularly liked the picture of essential undoneness. A truly universal concept (which I will steal for my ideas folder).

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 23, 2009

    So, i did steal essential undoneness, as I said I would. By chance went in file just below ‘to solitude retire’, a piece of quote from somewhere. That idea too might have fit into your poem.

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