Seeing a child with a deadly disease is tearful! I can’t imagine how they must feel but I tried once.

Another sleepless night

sometimes this sickness is too much to fight

I want to play like normal children

rather than being locked in this den

isn’t an eight year old supposed to be worry free

rather than hoping for a cure from a maricle tree

or worrying about death before thirty

I want to run, play, and get dirty

but most days I lack the strength to do so

that’s when I wish I could just go

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  • ceegirl on Oct 19, 2009

    Good write, I like it.

  • ashan1614 on Oct 19, 2009

    It is heart-breaking to see a child so ill that they can’t do what other children do.

  • martie on Oct 19, 2009

    sad, but nice write.

  • sandie on Oct 19, 2009

    sad but good poem.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 19, 2009

    Lovely poem, sad but truthful!It is always sad to see children in this way!

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