…a lonely sigh lost in the loneliness.

Sighs, feelings, sighs of feelings, I’m falling in my feelings, abysmal sighs.
They are in my eyes, they are in my wishes. Now I think in your eyes, your tender eyes, your eyes: my infinite and warm sweet dreams.

My sighs, my feelings, they are pleas for sweet love, these are my words for you, my words for you.

Your lips, your body: my desire and my happiness.
My feelings, my deep feelings, a lonely sigh lost in the loneliness.

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  • LoveDoctor on Nov 10, 2009

    great poem! good imagery.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 11, 2009

    Oh my Gosh! That is soo good! I loved it especially how it helped me to understand what you were saying with repetition but always with a different spice-you had a way adding things each time. And i feel very much like this as well at times…but then also grateful for my independence and self reliance at other times.

  • mona rastogi on Jun 4, 2011

    good share

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