The silence here is deafening

the emptiness ringing in my ears

take me out of my life

if only for a second

to glimpse beyond this world

that tries to plague my vision

surround myself in surreal belonging

to make up for theses insufficient feelings

until i have exhausted all the roads

that lay underneath my conscious self

on a backdrop of nightfall

derived from lucid wanderings

shedding automatic tears

releasing so much stress it is astounding

in a place i can deprive myself from true pain

over countless absent years

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 26, 2010

    Wonderfully written.

  • Shamyl on Apr 26, 2010

    Yea awesome writing. Good job !!

  • Atanacio on Apr 26, 2010

    i cant get over how well your writing style steals the page

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 26, 2010

    Yes, at times silence is louder than noise. A good poem, very good. Keep it up.

  • giftarist on Apr 26, 2010

    Cool!

  • TwiKnight on May 9, 2010

    The emptiness of silence, a painkiller to our lives… great post!!

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