Silent as Snowfall

Darrell W Penner on Jul 29, 2009

Tags: “perfect words”, “whirling down”, define, fail, failing, fall, falling, flail, flailing, love, LOVED ONE, lover, silence, silent, snow, snowfall, struggle, whirl, words

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Sometimes we might struggle in silence to find the perfect words to describe our loved one or our love for them.

Silent as Snowfall

Snow whirling down
Words fall flailing failing
To define my love

Image via Wikipedia

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Darrell W Penner on Jul 29, 2009
I wrote this inspired by a challenge by fellow poet – Milton H Peebles III, Jul 28, 2009 – in inspiration of his own “Not Making any sound”… Which might explain writing of snow on a hot July day.
http://www.authspot.com/Journals/Ive-Got-a-Dare-for-You.908043
Milton H Peebles III on Jul 29, 2009
This is good. Not really into haiku, but I still like this. Actually I am impressed with this.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Joie Schmidt on Jul 29, 2009
Beautiful work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Darla Cooke on Jul 31, 2009
It’s lovely and the picture is beautiful!

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