Eyes, they can really stir up a lot.

As eyes so peer within my depths

With fingers they seem to grasp my soul

My heart beats, quickening by touch

Yet, there you are just looking

Your eyes seem to not only see

But, they too envelop

They make love to my being

As they seduce my every thought

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  • Vikram Chhabra on Jan 22, 2010

    Wow Mike!! That was real passionate and romantic. Its great to read your poetry as always my friend!!

  • ken bultman on Jan 22, 2010

    The ayes have it.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 22, 2010

    Lovely and romantic!

  • papaleng on Jan 23, 2010

    neatly done and full of passion.

  • Petalm on Jan 24, 2010

    Really a work of art, well done great writing.

  • fragile18 on Feb 14, 2010

    lovely poem!

  • standingproud on Feb 26, 2010

    Yes very lovely poem.
    The eyes are windows to our soul.

  • Goodselfme on Sep 17, 2010

    You have captured the essence of the stare and yet the beauty of the feeling behind it as well. How could I have missed this one piece of prose. Glad I happened onto it now.

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