Silently Waiting

Darla Cooke on Jul 3, 2009

Tags: bored, changes, hide, retreat, time, tired, wait, worried

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There’s only been subtle changes.

I have endured a long wait,

as the time passes slowly.

Nothing much different is happening,

there’s only been subtle changes.

Things are only getting worse,

this is a difficult situation.

I am growing even more worried,

I just want to retreat and hide.

Instead I’m still silently waiting,

feeling so very tired and bored.

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Comments (11)

Hollywood James on Jul 3, 2009
Darla,

I know exactly how it is to be tired and bored. Nice piece.
Brenda Nelson on Jul 3, 2009
Isnt a subtle change better than none at all?
Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 3, 2009
Fight it and make your own changes. Do what you need to do.
goodselfme on Jul 3, 2009
deep and questioning.
Ramalingam on Jul 3, 2009
A poem with a mystery.
lh on Jul 3, 2009
take heed,
make speed,
let some doctor in ,
get spent,
then you will never relent
Deep Blue on Jul 3, 2009
It speaks of patience. The wait could take longer but you did it in silence.
ken bultman on Jul 3, 2009
Depends on what you’re waiting for, I guess.
livemike on Jul 4, 2009
Time to let go…life is too short..Live the life you want..
Mystify on Jul 4, 2009
Interesting questioning poem,Great job
STEVE666 on Jul 6, 2009
Your thoughts are very deep on this one, Darla.

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