I was inspired by cloud shape by the water that looked like a Silhouette of an Angel.

With waves rippling across the water,

It was only time before I spot her.

A silhouette of an angel in the horizon.

She’s an angel full of love,

Look she’s holding a white dove.

You wonder why this man fell in love.

This time the roles reverse,

She pulls out the love note first.

It reads, that young boy I came to know,

Turns out to be that man I’m proud to show,

To my friends, my family,

He may be soft and gentle, but very manly.

He has my trust and he knew it was a must.

Hush he says, I want no man to know the recipe.

The key to your heart, and where I put it you see.

11
Liked it
Comments (15)
  • PR Mace on Jun 12, 2011

    That was just plain lovely.

  • C Jordan on Jun 12, 2011

    Really nice sentiment Chris.

  • Karen Gross on Jun 12, 2011

    Soft & fluffy poem, but packs a solid message about the peace that comes from knowing you can trust the one person who holds the key to your heart to never abuse the privilege.

  • Francois Hagnere on Jun 13, 2011

    What a beauty! I really loved this poem. Bravo Chris!

  • The Quail 1957 on Jun 13, 2011

    Excellent tribute and poem!

  • papaleng on Jun 13, 2011

    good imagery! you did outdone yourself in here, Chris.

  • Judy Sheldon on Jun 13, 2011

    Sweet and sensible and the same time.

  • beingwell on Aug 8, 2011

    Lovely poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 1, 2011

    Such a beautiful and imaginative poem.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 1, 2011

    A beautiful poem.

  • LCM Linda on Dec 29, 2011

    Lovely poem. An enjoyable read.

  • MJRapp on Dec 29, 2011

    Very nice! Inspiration comes out of nowhere sometimes.

  • avissado on Jan 25, 2012

    lovely poem! enjoyed reading it!

  • Jo Oliver on Feb 1, 2012

    I absolutely love the last two lines. Very creative.

  • tankermone on Mar 8, 2012

    Well done, a lovely piece of writing!

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading