Comments on: Silver Ripples in Dark Waters

By: Miss Sparkle

Miss Sparkle — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 07:54:21 +0000

….Thank u all for readin n understandin…..
…its an elatin feelin that some1’s read the poem word by word n has gone into the writers shoes….m whelmed…..

By: Biswajit

Biswajit — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 07:47:05 +0000

u are right actually, some ppl can be that idiotic and impractical. they knw there is not going to be any retaliation of their feelings, still they insist on feeling that way only. stupid,idiotic, nonsensical, but still very much a reality. chalo, good that u feel that way. nice way of expressing…

By: Madhur

Madhur — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 07:45:33 +0000

there is pain in the poem and very well expressed. Life has to move on and irrespective of whether the other person loves or not but the love for her never dies – your point you have established so well.

I have a hundred reasons not to like it but i have one reason to like it and it camouflages it all:

I can connect to it ..

By: Mridula

Mridula — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 11:31:52 +0000

I just haven’t been able to sleep after I read this piece . I HAD to come back 2 it 2 reread & comment!! This is a sheer experience.
thats called perfect execution…. wow mam… u rock !!

By: Bipasha

Bipasha — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 08:59:24 +0000

I really, really liked it. Could feel the sense of desperation and mild fury. And what a great title ! Reminds one of Ozon’s masterful “Water Drops on Burning Rocks”. Keep going this way, Sparky!!

By: Imroz

Imroz — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 08:50:06 +0000

You know I read it aloud and they way it sounded was almost like the sound of rain droplets at the window ( May b my voice has a magic ) But your poems is outstanding ….

By: Miss Sparkle

Miss Sparkle — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 14:02:31 +0000

Thanks a million All of U 4 dropping by!! I’m honored.

By: Duryodhan charkavarthi

Duryodhan charkavarthi — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:31:53 +0000

Whenever I like something too much or too little, I give it time, allow it to sink,grow and ripen. In this case, its obviously the former. I reckon this is definitely amongst the best pieces written by you.

Absolutely stunning!

By: Urag

Urag — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:27:32 +0000

Brilliant!! An absolutely breathtaking piece! I wish I could say more. But let this suffice for now. Thanks for sharing.

By: Saumya

Saumya — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:23:57 +0000

.. Just couldn’t resist Sparkle This is breathtaking, no other word comes to my mind. You are just what you are..unique and so completely at ease, in your thoughts.

Keep your words thus !