I once thought –

I’ve dreamed of you

Like never before,

My thoughts capture

The depth of your being,

From the bottom of my heart,

I can manage to say,

And that would I do

To expose what I feel,

It’s been quiet so long,

That its been concealed,

The better part of it

Is it carry the intense

Of what I call the best,

And little by little resumed

All that can be save,

In this case that simply

Allows me to aspire

For a long time commitment,

And truly live the life,

Which in its apparent truth,

Can say all throughout –

Sincerely yours, Gift.

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Comments (29)
  • clay hurtubise on Jan 28, 2010

    Nice piece.
    Thanks,
    clay

  • amandeep13 on Jan 28, 2010

    Good Stuff

    Keep the good work on

  • K Kristie on Jan 28, 2010

    wow, galing ah! =)

  • devsir on Jan 28, 2010

    How Nice ! Excellent !

    Sincerely Yours’

    devsir

  • Sushant94 on Jan 28, 2010

    loved it! great theme!

  • drelayaraja on Jan 28, 2010

    Great stuff. Nicely peresented.

  • Starpisces on Jan 28, 2010

    another good piece from you…

  • diamondpoet on Jan 28, 2010

    Excellent post.

  • johnnydod on Jan 28, 2010

    That was quite lovely

  • cobaltinee on Jan 28, 2010

    Very god poem. I like it.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 28, 2010

    Very nice poem!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 28, 2010

    A very well expressed piece.

    Christine

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 28, 2010

    Sincere piece.

  • chitragopi on Jan 28, 2010

    Nice and true. good pencil sketch. Done by you?

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 28, 2010

    SIMPLY XCELLENT GR888888
    LH

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 28, 2010

    Nicely written poem. Good choice of words that expresses the feelings in the right way.

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 28, 2010

    Nice, very nice!

  • sambhafusia on Jan 28, 2010

    nice one.. very true..

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 28, 2010

    lovely says lovely h

    once again

    next one please

    sincerely urs lh

  • AlmaG on Jan 28, 2010

    The cute boy is inlove ^_^ Seems like VDay would be a very special day… UYyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 28, 2010

    Such a lovely piece, gift.

  • standingproud on Jan 29, 2010

    :) oh I liked lots

  • Butterfly Musings on Jan 29, 2010

    very nice

  • alensmith on Jan 29, 2010

    nice work

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 29, 2010

    Nice one…I like it….

  • albert1jemi on Jan 29, 2010

    beautifully written

  • monica55 on Jan 30, 2010

    Truly endearing piece. Well done.
    Monica.

  • T. S. GARP on Jan 30, 2010

    Very nice!

  • Liz Sapphire on Feb 2, 2010

    Aw, that was very sweet. Keep up the good work.

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