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A bright full moon is shining,

on this frightful Autumn night.

A cool breeze flows through the room,

as I awaken from another dream.

Sinister demons were watching me,

peering from every dark corner.

They have been tormenting me nightly.

Will I soon become their captive,

as they feed on my life-giving blood?

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  • Teves on Oct 28, 2009

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  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Oct 28, 2009

    Wow Darla…such dark stuff lately.

    I love it.

  • Virginia B Gaces on Oct 28, 2009

    Short but tangy, Way to go!

  • diamondpoet on Oct 28, 2009

    You should get some garlice for that. lol
    Very good write, I really liked it.

  • Tracey Parece on Oct 28, 2009

    Nice poem about incubi or succubi or vampires. Great tone for the Halloween season.

  • johnnydod on Oct 28, 2009

    owwww Darla now your scaring me .

  • ken bultman on Oct 28, 2009

    You have spooky dreams.

  • ceegirl on Oct 28, 2009

    love it

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 28, 2009

    Great for this time of year…garlic yes I think

  • writing4angels on Oct 28, 2009

    Very well written. I use to feel that way when in childhood I had to live in a hostel room alone and it was very dark out there.

  • Linda Lori on Oct 28, 2009

    Scarily fantastic!!!

  • Michael Eboh on Oct 28, 2009

    Wonderfully put thanks!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 28, 2009

    A great piece of work…

  • glamorousamanda on Oct 28, 2009

    Amazing!

  • Olivia Van Logum on Oct 28, 2009

    Ewww – I don’t want demons to feed on me! Great poem!

  • alc on Oct 28, 2009

    Sent chills down my spine! Thanks for the wake me up!

  • CA Johnson on Oct 28, 2009

    I loved it, Darla! It was a very scary poem! It is perfect for Halloween.

  • xoxo on Oct 28, 2009

    Frightening write brrr…

  • larry84 on Oct 28, 2009

    Spooky!! I liked it!

  • Tattoo3658we on Oct 28, 2009

    Are you sure it was a dream? Humans are, after all at there weakest, when there Sleeping, and it’s almost Halloween!

  • cardy on Oct 28, 2009

    A fab write from loved it I love this kind of work from you.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 28, 2009

    Great poem,with some great imagery!

  • lillyrose on Oct 29, 2009

    nice one, you have got a dark side! LOL

  • neet on Oct 29, 2009

    O …..o Scary.

  • Alicia Wind on Oct 29, 2009

    You mean vampire will suck your blood? Scary!

  • honey2licq on Oct 29, 2009

    is it time to get out the stakes and holy water??! great poem hun

  • Milton H Peebles III on Oct 29, 2009

    enjoyed this
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

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