Guilt can certainly weigh anyone down.

Stagnating, in the misery of borrowed time
I feel myself decaying to less than myself
As alone, in the mire of fraudulent attempts
My actions do more to further condemn me
I am but waiting to be taken, consumed
In the quicksand of deplorable guilt

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  • Darla Cooke on Oct 29, 2009

    I know what it feels like to be weighed down by guilt.

  • ken bultman on Oct 29, 2009

    Good write. Maybe it’s time to fess up.

  • Will Gray on Oct 29, 2009

    Fantastic emotional write!

  • alc on Oct 29, 2009

    great write

  • Petalm on Nov 3, 2009

    This is real writing, you don’t see a lot of that on the net.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 17, 2009

    Very powerful insightful piece.

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