Sir you raise a touchy subject. As if every one, should lose ones virginity…

Sir you raise a touchy subject,

As if every one,

Should lose ones virginity,

At birth itself.

In my study of the Human Mind,

I have come across virgins,

Even though married,

Remain virgins,

Some die uncared…

Why do we give so much stress,

To just a membrane in distress,

That nature gave to secure the fairer sex,

Men didn’t need it whatsoever at any pretext.

If the gate can be opened,

By just anyone,

Ah the owner has no say,

Why in heavens was the key,

Given to that sole one,

Just only to play.

Friend’s virginity is simply a state of mind,

I have found many lose virginity,

While swimming,

Horse riding or even masturbating

Sex, lust and love, kindly do not combine,

Find topics more interesting of another kind.

Should you address this personal question,

To many a woman, all of them will say,

Its personal invasion just let it remain that way.

So my friend a question I ask of you,

Had you too been a virgin woman too,

Wouldn’t you love to lose your virginity,

Someday to someone who so ever loved you

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Comments (22)
  • The Soul Explorer on Jun 15, 2011

    Cool

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 15, 2011

    thanks marco

    this poem was composed

    three years ago

    when most were not

    in the womb of triond

  • yeasin on Jun 16, 2011

    nice post

  • Prometheus Ridley Scott on Jun 16, 2011

    Cool poem

  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 16, 2011

    well mentioned

  • foxpete88 on Jun 16, 2011

    great share…thanks.-

  • Judy Kaelin on Jun 16, 2011

    Good job!

  • lapasan on Jun 16, 2011

    It’s nice to lose one’s virginity to someone she loves.

  • papaleng on Jun 18, 2011

    you presented a different writing style, but still with good thought.

  • iva75cpb on Jun 20, 2011

    Interesting… Virginity is sacred and indeed must be lost to a loved one, not to a stranger.

  • vickylass on Jun 21, 2011

    What can be very good, it can also be disgussting with the wrong person. Women shouldn´t rush. Sorry mate, but this is the way I see it. Men come from Mars and women from Venus, which means we have different views and expectations. Anyway, I liked reading it. Thanks for sharing.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 22, 2011

    Raunchy, Earthy Sexually Explicit
    Raunchy, sexually explicit,
    Earthy, but not vulgar.
    A word of caution for all,
    Who deceive?
    Its raunchy an adjective we perceive,
    In its true sense
    Believe or don’t believe
    But stab I none,
    As do many behind their raunchy life,
    They themselves lead raunchy,
    Yes but pragmatic too,

    Love is nothing else,
    ,
    But sugar coated lust,
    Hope you all knew.
    Raunchy me

    The Red Rose.

    I JUST COMPOSED IT
    AND TRIOND BLINDLY REJECTED IT
    W/O A WINK AUTO SYSTEM FAILURE

    HIGH TIME EDITOR OF TRIOND WOKE UP

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 22, 2011

    DO YOU ALL
    AS A MANAGEMENT STILL EXIST
    OR RELY NOW ON ONLY
    TO THOSE WHO EARN
    DOLLARS FOR YOU
    LOVELY HONEY LH

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 22, 2011

    u never reply at all

  • Lynn Hollis on Jun 23, 2011

    Nice work on a touchy subject.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 23, 2011

    Every thing i now post triond objects it,
    they have lost their wits
    sad they rely on automation
    which is eroding them

    sarcasm as u say
    so be it
    as it may

    Girl Child

    I read the article definition too
    what is the girl’s purpose in life
    wish all knew

    Girl is romantic lust==still its
    G I R L

    GIFT INDEFINETLY REALISTICALLY LOVED,
    still its girl

    Going instantly reminsciencing lust,
    still its girl

    and so on till girl is put to rest,
    just a girl in love friend
    Do tease and test…

    Hold

    Hold a child’s hand,
    as long as you can
    for soon the child will be,
    no more a child,
    but a grown up man,
    Nay a woman…
    then they will hold
    someone else’s hand
    my friend
    Hold this child’s hand…

  • isloooboy on Jun 23, 2011

    Very nice and really touchy

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 24, 2011

    thanks islooooooooooooooooooooooooo

  • gaby7 on Jun 24, 2011

    Interesting piece here!

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 2, 2011

    I think your poem is doing my head in, but at least I’m not watching TV – thanks anyway.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jul 3, 2011

    hi Dennis
    i;m not quite sure i have understood ur remark
    thankx any way

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 3, 2011

    Yes my comment on reflection was obtuse.
    I assure you it was praise and not abuse.
    Liked it.

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