Poetry.

Oh sister of mine, you were so divine.

What happened to your golden glow?

Blond hair in locks, 

That you loved so much,

And a beautiful figure you’d show.

You lost all that when you met him,

I was just a child of ten.

I remember it well when he took you away,

I took it really hard that day

My best friend, my second mum,

My sister and my best-est chum

You were all of them to me.

But he stood in your path so you could not see.

We lost our friendship we grew apart,

Twas like a dagger through my heart.

You grew bitter, i don’t know why,

You cut off all the family ties,

I know it was all down to him

But you became his female twin.

Sister of mine what happened to you?

You turned so greedy through and through!

I did nothing but with my heart i tried,

But you did some things i couldn’t abide,

Like swearing and cursing at our mother,

You said such bad things about our brother!

We only ever done good for you,

Helped you all the way.

So how about a thank you

And we will put our differences at bay?

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  • A Bromley on Dec 11, 2011

    Good poem with well expressed emotions. Sometimes these things happen and there is really no explanation for it. It is sad. I can empathize. Nice share.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 12, 2011

    Touching and sad.No one can keep relations for long and we don’t even try to build again that whom we love they thug:(

  • Elove Poetry on Dec 13, 2011

    well… that’s why man and woman shall become one, leave their families

  • JackieLeeNewman on Dec 13, 2011

    Great poem, well expressed emotions :)

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