On the dark side.

I take the side that reality brings.
To this humble alter I bring this offering.
Eternity wilted like the flower,
Through this organized chaos, the poet holds the power.
Death becomes as illusion,
With one small exclusion.
To come inside the picture frame.
Untainted beauty of the insane.
No solace comes to the great murderer in his torment.
Guilt befalls the survivor as a soul is sent.
Sent her to Shock Valley,
The place to rally.
The strength replenished in a day’s retreat.
To humble the arrogant is no great feat.
Children born stay forever young.
Ancient minds few, their time near done.
Give us a chance to do it again.
We wish not to live among the dead.
In this great lie, we take life in vain.
The time has now come, the time to be slain.

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  • Tom Woodside on Oct 22, 2008

    i see the same thing sometimes. it is a harsh reality, but it is reality. thanks for a great poem

  • Will Gray on Oct 22, 2008

    Very powerful imagery and emotion. Well written!

  • Lavia on Oct 22, 2008

    It is very dark indeed. I loved it!

  • goodselfme on Oct 22, 2008

    Well done visionary write.

  • Geri on Oct 22, 2008

    Very Strong and dark imagery, (almost medieaval)

  • Joanna Maharis on Oct 22, 2008

    This is a very deep, very dark, powerfully heartfelt poem.

    Take Care,

    Joanna Maharis

  • Lostash on Oct 25, 2008

    I love this one too Allison. My new favourite!

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