Some people.

Some people make you so upset that you want to just

want to slap the crap out of their face, so bad that you have the feeling your about to bust.

They don’t know the kind of damage they could be in for

If  it was legal there are so many people I’d love to slap into the flor

Everyone that  makes you mad to almost the point of no return

It’s a feeling of wishing you could watch people litteraly burn.

The mail lady steals my mail  slams my mail box like she’s freakin crazy

She’s the first person i’d slap & kick so far up her well you know what a person sits on that makes you lazy.

This is how someone can release some agression

Instead of feeling lots of built up frustration

Sometimes people do it for a thrill

And video tape it now if someone did this to you how would it make you feel?

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  • cardy on Dec 3, 2010

    I like this many at time I have thought the same thing towards someone but just thought it. Happy slap makes me cringe. A good write from you.

  • jimbob1 on Dec 3, 2010

    SexyH…remind me never to slam the lid of your mailbox!!! I can identify with the frustration that you have expressed…for me my biggest wish is that I could have a bazooka under the hood of my car!!! Anyway, I voted that I like this…as much as we’d like to kick some ass, sometimes even writing about it is a helpful form of releasing some of that pent up anger and frustration…thanks and take care…

  • lyan08 on Dec 3, 2010

    nice share

  • addjust on Dec 3, 2010

    Great post.

  • Anj M on Dec 3, 2010

    Nice poem..

  • albert1jemi on Dec 3, 2010

    grt job

  • Robin L on Dec 13, 2010

    Well done!

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