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Slave (Haiku)

Angelji on Jan 6, 2012
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The one who gives you extreme happiness is the one who would also give you extreme sadness. Love hurts and love scars.

Tears are flooding

Pain  from top to bottom

Am slave of my heart.

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  • Saurav Banerjee on Jan 6, 2012

    Can understand your feelings.

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 6, 2012

    There is a certain nobility to being a slave to one’s heart. But there is also a sense that it is a nobility that one needs to avoid or fix if you already have it. To be in a state of permanent slavery to one’s heart would be emotionally exhausting.

  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 6, 2012

    We are
    Slave of our desires
    Perhaps

  • pattiann on Jan 6, 2012

    I have decently had my heart broken. By a con men. I know how you feel. I am sorry this happened to such a nice person like you.

  • aheed411 on Jan 6, 2012

    good

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 6, 2012

    very true. this happens especially if you love the person so much that you’re expecting so much from him in return.

  • iva75cpb on Jan 6, 2012

    Beautiful, as always.

  • indianwriting on Jan 7, 2012

    i guess we all are… to an extent :)

  • ittech on Jan 8, 2012

    Pain from greatest
    Am soul of my two-dimensional figure.

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