Sleazy Guy Exposed

Sakuragi on Feb 14, 2009

Tags: exposed, guy, sleazy, Sleazy guy exposed, victim, victimized

He had the looks, he had the charm and everything money can buy.

A lady friend of mine
Went out with this guy.
He had the looks, he had the charm
And everything money can buy.
So they were cruisin’
Along a road,
When into a motel
He suddenly drove.
Startled,
my friend yelled “Hey!”
“Relax,” he said,
“It’s a short cut. I know the way.”
Only when she got home
Did she fully realize
It was no short cut
She was almost victimized.
He was testing the waters,
You see,
Brazenly trying to check
If she was that easy.
I have only one word
To describe such a bozo.
It has an A, two S’s,
And the rest—you already know.

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Vikram Chhabra on Feb 14, 2009
Well said!
Darla Smith on Feb 14, 2009
Very nice poem.
Joni Keith on Feb 14, 2009
Nice that you chose to speak out of behalf of all women victimized by such bozos. This guy was a creep and I’m glad you’re friend let him know she was on to him. Great write.
rutherfranc on Feb 14, 2009
good for your friend..
cardy on Feb 14, 2009
loved the read nice work!
AC Hamilton III on Feb 14, 2009
Great job! Tell it like it is!

AC
Sakuragi on Feb 14, 2009
This was my first attempt at poetry. Thanks a lot for reading guys!
Lee Altman on Feb 14, 2009
Sakuragi, You did an excellent job with the poem and that bozzo
Jose Monaca on Feb 15, 2009
It was nice, a bit sad but it’s the truth..
nutuba on Feb 15, 2009
excellent poem on a stark situation. Nicely handled.
papaleng on Feb 15, 2009
well said, girls must be alert at all times for there are vultures seeking and waiting for a prey.
postpunkpixie on Feb 16, 2009
Great, I love how it\’s basically everyday language manipulated into a poem
Alicia Wind on Feb 17, 2009
Oh men—they thought that women will open their legs easily….geez geez…–unless a woman has a no string attach adventure of her life- that would be easy!
C LEBLANC on Feb 17, 2009
right on! guy’s like that should be shot!
Majic on Feb 17, 2009
Yup. They’re everywhere! Some sleazy guys don’t even need a car and they can get away with this sort of behaviour!
You’re good on the first attempt! So I wonder how well it will be the next time around!
Cardinalsfan on Feb 18, 2009
Very nice. I like the end.
denus on Feb 20, 2009
very interesting piece.
Judy Sheldon on Feb 21, 2009
Wonderfully written. I’m glad your friend was not dazzled.
Bo Russo on Feb 22, 2009
Cool poem,what a jerk.
Kate Smedley on Feb 22, 2009
Great ending, so well put!
kris miyasako on Feb 23, 2009
Very cool indeed. a very timely piece.
eddiego65 on Feb 24, 2009
Great first attempt at poetry. Keep on writing!
leannehume on Feb 24, 2009
First attempt… Wow! this is very good! Good message in there too. Telling people to be careful! I like it.
Lisa Clayton Williams on Feb 24, 2009
Love this! Especially like the ending!! Great work!
kimmy on Feb 25, 2009
This poem is a true story. I know because I’m the author’s “lady friend”. Nice of him to warn others about creeps by publishing my experience with one, wouldn’t you agree?
Aldrin A Wilding West on Feb 26, 2009
Good one. Your friend should be pleased you care about her enough to write this down.
Ruby Hawk on Mar 3, 2009
That\’s a good one. Gotta watch out for these creeps.
CutestPrincess on Mar 4, 2009
good choice of title… very well written poem.
charbernard on Mar 10, 2009
that was pretty good i like that alot
Bren Parks on Mar 12, 2009
scary…well written though.
MMV Abad on Mar 12, 2009
Well written! And I know what you mean by A with two ss. LOL!
Karen Gross on Mar 18, 2009
Your friend’s guardian angel was watching out for her. It’s dangerous to get into a car with a guy you don’t know!
Tena Mosher on Mar 28, 2009
very creative with your writing. great job!
clay hurtubise on Mar 28, 2009
Good job!
Thanks,
Clay

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