Comments on: Sleep, the Enemy I Crave http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/ Sat, 20 Mar 2010 12:09:46 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: nynx http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721939 nynx Mon, 23 Mar 2009 18:20:21 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721939 i like it lots.... very um powerful i like it lots…. very um powerful

]]> By: Daisy Peasblossom http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721937 Daisy Peasblossom Sun, 22 Mar 2009 16:52:45 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721937 Hang in there. Hang in there.

]]> By: Melody Arcamo Lagrimas http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721935 Melody Arcamo Lagrimas Sun, 22 Mar 2009 11:35:48 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721935 Powerfully vivid words. Great one, Dave. Powerfully vivid words. Great one, Dave.

]]> By: Chris Stonecipher http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721933 Chris Stonecipher Sun, 22 Mar 2009 05:48:18 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721933 I often have those perpetual dreams. Sometimes dreams within a dream. I enjoyed this poem Dave. Nice work! I often have those perpetual dreams. Sometimes dreams within a dream. I enjoyed this poem Dave. Nice work!

]]> By: Lauren Axelrod http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721931 Lauren Axelrod Sat, 21 Mar 2009 19:13:36 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721931 It is often perturbing to be lost in the scenes taking place in our thoughts during a deep sleep. An interesting and provocative piece Dave. It is often perturbing to be lost in the scenes taking place in our thoughts during a deep sleep. An interesting and provocative piece Dave.

]]> By: Paula Andrea http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721929 Paula Andrea Sat, 21 Mar 2009 15:20:23 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721929 In the midst of a vibrant life, you have connected to the reality of 'death' which makes living all the much more mysterious and full. In the midst of a vibrant life, you have connected to the reality of ‘death’ which makes living all the much more mysterious and full.

]]> By: nesita http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721927 nesita Sat, 21 Mar 2009 15:19:43 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721927 piercing! piercing!

]]> By: Lady Sunshine http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721925 Lady Sunshine Sat, 21 Mar 2009 14:33:12 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721925 A chillingly haunting piece, Dave. You got me chilled to the bone. A chillingly haunting piece, Dave. You got me chilled to the bone.

]]> By: Kate Smedley http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721923 Kate Smedley Sat, 21 Mar 2009 09:05:45 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721923 I really like this, especially 'i'm one day closer to death', sent chills through me! I really like this, especially ‘i’m one day closer to death’, sent chills through me!

]]> By: Bullwinkle Muse http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/comment-page-1/#comment-721921 Bullwinkle Muse Sat, 21 Mar 2009 07:54:56 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/sleep-the-enemy-i-crave/#comment-721921 Too many doorways know<br /> the memory of my shadow.<br /> Each one of them keeps a<br /> little piece of me .<br /> <br /> I like this, Dave. Well done. Too many doorways know
the memory of my shadow.
Each one of them keeps a
little piece of me .

I like this, Dave. Well done.

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