The mind becomes very creative when we sleep. I am sure we as children had beautiful dreams which were interrupted by our mothers.

The eve makes me sleepy-eyed.

So I lie down to rest.

My unruly day safely tucked away.

Only thing relevant now is sleep.

Tossing and turning through what now exist,

as my own customized sleep pattern.

Drifting in and out of consciousness.

I finally find myself trasping through,

a delightful floral background.

I am consumed with the exquisite aromas.

In my mind I absorbe the wonders of nature.

Then so abruptly, I am awakened,

by mother shouts “get up you’ll be late for school”.

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Comments (10)
  • Sharif Ishnin on Nov 10, 2009

    Sweet dreams are made of these. Enjoyable piece of work.;)

  • Themax on Nov 10, 2009

    Ha Ha it is really hilarious at the end part!!
    You are a beautiful writer,Thanks :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 10, 2009

    That was such a lovely description until you were interrupted.

    Christine

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 10, 2009

    Sweet dreams.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009

    I like this one a lot.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 10, 2009

    So much of life is like that, reality crashes into our dreams.

  • Snooky on Nov 11, 2009

    aint that the rude awakening truth

  • Hansika on Nov 11, 2009

    sweet dreams……lovely

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 11, 2009

    LOL.This has happened way too many times with most of us.Very sweet.

  • Shekinah Shazaam on Nov 12, 2009

    dang that momma! D<
    loved the poem!

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