You seem to be a living cupid, whose slingshot makes my vine so stupid.

Beauty defines you.
It is in thy view.
Temptation is within your avenue.
This is where you gain much revenue.

A simple smile is a killing persuasion.
It means a lot to my association.
For you is a living pollination
Pollen grain inviting a gallant culmination

How could this feeling meant to be?
Too much, can’t help it; I’m so afraid to flee.
I’m willing to escape from this dream of ecstasy.
But, how could I if my heart believes in fantasy?

So, let me in even for a jumpy while
Be a stranger, a guest, a friend farther than mile
You sew me to everlasting soulful desire
More than life’s treasure coz you play the lire

Weaves the rhythm; completes the broken puzzle
Brings romantic saxophone that attracts mysterious sizzle
You seem to be a living cupid.
Whose slingshot makes my vine so stupid!

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Comments (14)
  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 6, 2009

    I don’t know what to say, my friend. It’s awesome.

  • Bick Parker on Feb 7, 2009

    Erm … yeh … this really did make my slingshot go twang, and my vine’s gone totally bananas as a result.

  • 2tet on Feb 7, 2009

    Thanks to Ruby and Bick…

    Blessings…

  • S A JOHNSON on Feb 8, 2009

    Nice work.

  • mysticdave on Feb 8, 2009

    wow, i like your style.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 8, 2009

    Really nice. Keep it up!!

  • sam on Feb 8, 2009

    man thats nice work

  • T B Forshaw on Feb 9, 2009

    Awesome work, your a good poet!

  • skylite on Feb 9, 2009

    Great work.

  • Likha on Feb 9, 2009

    You shot it right through the heart. Nice style.

  • Anne McNew on Feb 10, 2009

    This is such an awesome piece. Nice post.

  • Constance Ffrench on Feb 16, 2009

    It’s just beautiful.

  • C LEBLANC on Feb 18, 2009

    thats to cool!

  • ranzy on Feb 21, 2009

    ganda pla ng mga gawa u…
    me hindi me mrunong eehhh
    ganda tlaga….
    thanks ulitsss
    sa ginwa u…
    npakalaking bagay
    un sa akin….
    and thank you
    for being
    part of my life…
    wag u mag bgo ha….
    msaya ako nkilala
    kita at ngayon lng me
    nkarans ng ganito
    msaya nah ako nah andyan u pra sa akin
    thankssssssssssssssss
    UR MY angEL…

    thANKS AGAIN….

    (VRANZY)….

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