Bill and Pete decide to take a trip to the theatre with their wives and are put on their best behaviour. (So the wives think)

“Hello Pete its me Bill, has your Mavis told you,”

“Is that about the theatre Pete, yes she has.”

“Doreen has booked us good seats and view,”

“Thanks for that the last one gave me a saw  ….”

*************

“Who are on the phone to?” Doreen called out,

“Its only Pete, Sorry Mate just to say we are coming.”

“Bill, put your tie right, you look like an old drop-out,”

Mavis said to Bill, then he turned and started humming.”

*************

“Why are you humming that tune?” Doreen was annoyed,

“Its one of those that appear to stay in my mind all day.”

Bill answered politely knowing any conflict he must avoid,

For she will give him hell, if she doesn’t get her way.

*************

Meanwhile in the house of Pete and Mavis Smith,

“Come on Peter.” She nags him on to the door.

But like Bill, Pete does anything to avoid a tiff,

or he will get his nose rubbed into the floor.

*************

The two couples meet outside the theatre,

Mavis and Doreen walk on chatting ahead.

towards the box office they are now sweeter,

While Pete and Bill prefer the pub instead.

*************The two men watch the play in polite distaste,A women’s romantic play with hankies at the ready.Bill raises his eyes to heaven , “Oh what a waste,”Mavis glared at him, he thought “Steady.”*************Pete looks at Bill from the other side and gestures a drink,While the Women watch on with tears in their eyes.Doreen sees Pete gesturing to Bill, “No! if that is what you think,”Mavis looks at Bill who knows there will be trouble if he replies.*************How times have changed, to when Bill had his way,to being dragged to the theatre humming that tune.Doreen with Pete who was turning a pale grey,When the two women look and say “Ooh Look Coming Soon!”************* 

The End 

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  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 12, 2009

    hey that was cool i like the new play stuff its interesting but it looks hard wondeful job

  • payge on Apr 28, 2009

    I do get a huge kick out of Pete,Bill,Mavis and doreen,a great job as always Tim.

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