When relationships oscillate between hot and cold….

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You evade the answers
of uncolored questions posed,
painting outside the lines,
so erratically you stroke.

Chemicals fail to ignite
an already melted heart,
burning bolts of passion,
asphyxiated in the smoke.

Parched images always cast,
and then you come to me,
marinating the shadows,
drenched in my emotion.

We may never reach the depth
or even find the middle,
blinding power of love,
halted by the very notion.

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Comments (4)
  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 10, 2011

    This one smolders. Love the emotional images.

  • djbtol on Dec 11, 2011

    Sounds like a tough situation.

  • yes me on Dec 15, 2011

    What can one say, very good, excellent, you tear my pages with your passion ha ha ha… Linda I liked it all cheers

  • Prometheus Ridley Scott on Jan 31, 2012

    You capture a lot in this poem. Indeed, relationships can blow hot and cold.

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