Why no one should start smoking.

Smoking makes me cough
Companies selling death sticks
I wish I could stop

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  • LoveDoctor on Jul 18, 2010

    Awesome haiku. good job

  • Michal Dorcak on Jul 19, 2010

    Great job. I cannot understand what makes someone start smoking. I hate that smell …

  • CC23 on Jul 23, 2010

    simply great! =)

  • sasuke191 on Jul 25, 2010

    Nice one!!… I liked it on facebook!.. :)

  • Joseph Scott on Jul 26, 2010

    Thanks! Add me on Facebook if you like

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jul 30, 2010

    Good one :) A good reminder too!

  • Karen Gross on Jun 19, 2011

    I do so much agree with this one! I don’t know very many smokers who started smoking as adults; almost all of them started when they were kids. I hope that the next generation is wiser. My mother died of lung cancer. It is a horrible, horrible way to die. My dad is still smoking.

    I have been writing more words in commenting than you wrote – you pack a big punch with a few words. Excellent wordsmithing.

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