Written April 25, 2000.

Through blinded eyes

upon deaf ears

love escapes through tarnished years

how many have all the requirements

that their love needs

can this be shown via word or deed?

man is so demanding

in their needs

never satisfied by their deeds

love is like a smoldering flame

it needs to be kindled and tended to be lit

each has their own idea

of how this is done

but unless it’s right

the heart won’t be won

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  • ken bultman on Aug 3, 2009

    Good one. Knowing what is right is the missing element.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 5, 2009

    yes but what is right?
    everyone is taught different values, so what is right for one is not necessarily right for another.

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