Short poem using the word "smug" ad nauseum, reminding us that we don’t know everything we think we know, do we.

Smug as a Thug with a Lug wrench

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by LewSethics

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Just ‘cuz you’re smug

Don’t make you right

Tho it feel that way

From your great height

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I knew a guy

He used to be smug

He gave the wrong eye

To the wrong thug

The thug he got mad

And did what thugs do

Now I know a guy

Who drools in his shoe

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Then there was this dude

Another smug punk

He was so rude

You’d swear he was drunk

He messed with a narc

Now he’s doing time

No friends to come home to

In from three to five

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A chick I once knew

Was smug as can be

She ragged on the dudes

Like she was Bruce Lee

She cussed the wrong guy

And he knocked her out

Now she don’t smile

With no teeth in her mouth

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If you think this is wrong

Then just be polite

Some dudes don’t wait long

To get in a fight

Can’t tell who they are

Until its too late

Respect will go far

And equals create

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I don’t play smug

Smug is a slap

Smug is a drug

Smug is a trap

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http://www.triond.com/users/LewSethics

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http://musicouch.com/musicouching/ode-to-my-rapping-fellows/

http://authspot.com/poetry/ode-to-dienonychus/

http://authspot.com/poetry/run-with-scissors-kick-the-cat/

http://authspot.com/short-stories/dont-look-now-but-your-show-is-slipping/2/

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  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 22, 2010

    Very wise use of rhyming words. I loved it.

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 22, 2010

    Nice Poem

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Sep 23, 2010

    I like to have respect shown to me, and give it.
    Some people feel bigger by putting others lower.
    Good message Lew.

  • GodsGrace on Sep 23, 2010

    Very Good Pom

  • choochoo on Sep 23, 2010

    love it. My wife sometimes acts like that Bruce Lee chick. I’ll show her this poem

  • Goodselfme on Sep 23, 2010

    Violently exciting to read!

  • yes me on Sep 23, 2010

    I like Lew could be a bit of a Rap… cheers keep it going

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 24, 2010

    LOL, that’s one way to handle it.

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