The addiction that I put out.

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                                   Snake eye’s

Snake eye, snack eye, when are you going to leave?

I am like an addiction I get into your mind.

Like the snake I am.

My venom is so addicting its worse than any drug.

I wrap my body are you and make it hard for you to,

Think for your self i make you think and do what I want you to.

I am  snake eye you look into my eyes and fall in a trance that,

You can not get away from.

So snake eyes is who I am, love is what,

I do I am an addiction that you cannot get,

Held from there is no escape so face it.

I am here to stay…

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Comments (11)
  • Teves on Nov 2, 2009

    Good stuff…

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 2, 2009

    well done,

  • mo hoyal on Nov 3, 2009

    I’m sorry but I just don’t understand what you are talking about, nor do I recognize what the things are in the photo you are showing. If you are an addict, if you are an alcoholic? I fail to get this, sorry. Snake anti venom? What??? Am I just stupid???

  • Petalm on Nov 3, 2009

    Gambling addiction right?

  • lillyrose on Nov 3, 2009

    Love addiction?

  • chitragopi on Nov 3, 2009

    Good comparison. Nice poem

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • alc on Nov 3, 2009

    He is speaking of any addiction that is know to make the article personal! Thanks babe for the share!

  • Jo Oliver on Nov 3, 2009

    Addiction of any kind it is hard to understand until one actually has an addiction. Very well done poem.

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    very good to knew about this topic!!
    Thanks for sharing :)

  • Kakraba Afful on Feb 10, 2010

    Intelligent metaphorism. Love the word “snake”

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