My mind is trap.

I snapped because my mind is trapped

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Trapped in the darkness

It’s too much

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Hoping to bring my mind to lightness

I’m trying all my might to do right

To adapt that’s a fact

To overcome the trap mind.

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  • ken bultman on Apr 23, 2010

    The mind is flexible. You’ll adapt.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Apr 23, 2010

    I am sure Ken is right..:)

  • Atanacio on Apr 23, 2010

    another hit!!!!

  • Reilley on Apr 23, 2010

    Oh, snap! No you didn’t!

  • Night Story on Apr 23, 2010

    Cool. :)

  • Tina Cassello on Apr 23, 2010

    This is a nice poem. I am sure we all reach points when we wonder if we are about to lose our minds.

  • VTech on Apr 23, 2010

    Good Post,

  • deep blue on Apr 24, 2010

    Everybody has vices, it’s ok to snap once in a while as you know it.

  • Emma Green on Apr 24, 2010

    I can relate to this, great write.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 24, 2010

    A sweet little poem.

  • Lord Banks on Apr 24, 2010

    It does feel that way now and again, I have felt trapped many times, even right now. The world will turn for you trust me. LB

  • Will Gray on Apr 24, 2010

    Excellent!

  • sara20 on Apr 24, 2010

    Interesting post with lost of information and today i know about it more info. Thanks

    Sara

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 24, 2010

    i am trapped too

    but my mind is free like you

  • rizzei on Apr 25, 2010

    nice share, we can all relate. great thoughts :)

  • xoxo on Apr 25, 2010

    Nice2 :)

  • yes me on Apr 25, 2010

    Another nice post cheers Cee G

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 25, 2010

    Excellent post great job.

  • neha80 on Apr 26, 2010

    Interesting post, just today i know more about it. Good subject selection for writing articles. Thanks for sharing this good one.

    Anjal:

  • nutmegeyes on Apr 26, 2010

    Good one.

  • farmerdw02 on Apr 30, 2010

    Very nice
    Darrell

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