Influenced by the weather where I live.

So fluffy and white,
Catching all the light,
Twinkling like tiny stars,
Far off from a place near mars,
Covering the ground,
Making everybody bound,
By that joyful feeling,
Coming from deep down,
Throwing snowballs,
Building snowmen,
Sledging down hills,
Forgetting life and the bills,
Turning into a young child again,
Cheeks flushed red,
Nose pinched from the cold,
Who cares if everything stops,
Like work, buses and trains,
Enjoy the life,
Enjoy the time,
Mostly of all enjoy the snow.

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Comments (6)
  • Siti Zaida Mikaila aka SZM on Feb 3, 2009

    Wow, that’s beautiful Subhaanallaah!

  • Darla Smith on Feb 3, 2009

    Beautiful poem about snow.

  • Cantra on Feb 3, 2009

    Beautiful poem about snow. Wish I had some now

  • George W Whitehead on Feb 5, 2009

    Our snow disappeared today. Lovely poem, Chaz.

  • Ben donovan on Mar 7, 2009

    I do, I love the first snow fall but better yet is the last, these are the two that are more beautiful than all the rest.

  • dmccusker11 on Jun 9, 2009

    i love the snow!this poem was great

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